The changes section of the protocol spec cleaned up

Author: iherman

admin/TR/annotation-protocol/Overview.html

@@ -526,9 +526,8 @@ <h2 resource="#table-of-contents" id="table-of-contents" class="introductory"><s
       <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#candidate-recommendation-exit-criteria"><span class="secno">A. </span>Candidate Recommendation Exit Criteria</a></li>
       <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-previous-versions"><span class="secno">B. </span>Changes from Previous Versions</a>
         <ol class="toc">
-          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-07-12</a></li>
-          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</a></li>
-          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span class="secno">B.3 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</a></li>
+          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</a></li>
+          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</a></li>
         </ol>
       </li>
       <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#acknowledgments"><span class="secno">C. </span>Acknowledgments</a></li>
@@ -1422,28 +1421,21 @@ <h2 resource="#h-candidate-recommendation-exit-criteria" id="h-candidate-recomme
     <h2 resource="#h-changes-from-previous-versions" id="h-changes-from-previous-versions"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B. </span>Changes from Previous Versions</span></h2>
     <p><em>This section is non-normative.</em></p>
 
-    <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12">
-      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12" id="h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-07-12</span></h3>
+    <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12">
+      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12" id="h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</span></h3>
 
-      <ul>
-        <li>Added CR Exit Criteria</li>
-      </ul>
-    </section>
-
-    <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12">
-      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12" id="h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</span></h3>
-
-      <p>Significant technical changes in this specification from the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2016/CR-annotation-protocol-20160712/">Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</a> are:</p>
+      <p>Editorial changes in this specification from the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2016/CR-annotation-protocol-20160712/">Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</a> are:</p>
 
       <ul>
+        <li>Added CR Exit Criteria</li>
         <li>Editorial restructuring of the Pagination content.</li>
         <li>Clarified requirements for Annotation Server's representation preference handling.</li>
         <li>Explained the proper use of the <code>Prefer</code> header when the client has multiple preferences.</li>
       </ul>
     </section>
 
     <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31">
-      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31" id="h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.3 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</span></h3>
+      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31" id="h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</span></h3>
 
       <p>Significant technical changes in this specification from the <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/2016/WD-annotation-protocol-20160331/">Working Draft Published of 2016-03-31</a> are:</p>
 

protocol/wd/index-respec.html

@@ -933,25 +933,18 @@ <h3>Candidate Recommendation Exit Criteria</h3>
 <h3>Changes from Previous Versions</h3>
 
 <section>
-    <h3>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-07-12</h3>
+    <h3>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</h3>
+
+    <p>Editorial changes in this specification from the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2016/CR-annotation-protocol-20160712/">Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</a> are:</p>
 
     <ul>
-    <li>Added CR Exit Criteria</li>
+        <li>Added CR Exit Criteria</li>
+        <li>Editorial restructuring of the Pagination content.</li>
+        <li>Clarified requirements for Annotation Server's representation preference handling.</li>
+        <li>Explained the proper use of the <code>Prefer</code> header when the client has multiple preferences.</li>
     </ul>
 </section>
 
-<section>
-    <h3>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</h3>
-
-<p>Significant technical changes in this specification from the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2016/CR-annotation-protocol-20160712/">Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</a> are:</p>
-
-<ul>
-<li>Editorial restructuring of the Pagination content.</li>
-<li>Clarified requirements for Annotation Server's representation preference handling.</li>
-<li>Explained the proper use of the <code>Prefer</code> header when the client has multiple preferences.</li>
-</ul>
-</section>
-
 <section>
     <h3>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</h3>
 

protocol/wd/index.html

@@ -526,9 +526,8 @@ <h2 resource="#table-of-contents" id="table-of-contents" class="introductory"><s
       <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#candidate-recommendation-exit-criteria"><span class="secno">A. </span>Candidate Recommendation Exit Criteria</a></li>
       <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-previous-versions"><span class="secno">B. </span>Changes from Previous Versions</a>
         <ol class="toc">
-          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-07-12</a></li>
-          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</a></li>
-          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span class="secno">B.3 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</a></li>
+          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</a></li>
+          <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</a></li>
         </ol>
       </li>
       <li class="tocline"><a class="tocxref" href="#acknowledgments"><span class="secno">C. </span>Acknowledgments</a></li>
@@ -1422,28 +1421,21 @@ <h2 resource="#h-candidate-recommendation-exit-criteria" id="h-candidate-recomme
     <h2 resource="#h-changes-from-previous-versions" id="h-changes-from-previous-versions"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B. </span>Changes from Previous Versions</span></h2>
     <p><em>This section is non-normative.</em></p>
 
-    <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12">
-      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12" id="h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-07-12"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-07-12</span></h3>
+    <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12">
+      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12" id="h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-07-12"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.1 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</span></h3>
 
-      <ul>
-        <li>Added CR Exit Criteria</li>
-      </ul>
-    </section>
-
-    <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12">
-      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12" id="h-changes-from-the-candidate-recommendation-of-2016-06-12"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</span></h3>
-
-      <p>Significant technical changes in this specification from the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2016/CR-annotation-protocol-20160712/">Candidate Recommendation of 2016-06-12</a> are:</p>
+      <p>Editorial changes in this specification from the <a href="http://www.w3.org/TR/2016/CR-annotation-protocol-20160712/">Candidate Recommendation of 2016-07-12</a> are:</p>
 
       <ul>
+        <li>Added CR Exit Criteria</li>
         <li>Editorial restructuring of the Pagination content.</li>
         <li>Clarified requirements for Annotation Server's representation preference handling.</li>
         <li>Explained the proper use of the <code>Prefer</code> header when the client has multiple preferences.</li>
       </ul>
     </section>
 
     <section property="bibo:hasPart" resource="#changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31" typeof="bibo:Chapter" id="changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31">
-      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31" id="h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.3 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</span></h3>
+      <h3 resource="#h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31" id="h-changes-from-the-working-draft-of-2016-03-31"><span property="xhv:role" resource="xhv:heading"><span class="secno">B.2 </span>Changes from the Working Draft of 2016-03-31</span></h3>
 
       <p>Significant technical changes in this specification from the <a href="https://www.w3.org/TR/2016/WD-annotation-protocol-20160331/">Working Draft Published of 2016-03-31</a> are:</p>