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* Improve wording. * Improve grammar. * Replace hyphens with em dashes. * Replace straight apostrophes with typographic ones. * Replace straight quotation marks with typographic ones. Co-authored-by: Kamil Jarosz <kjarosh256@gmail.com>
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src/app/compatibility/avm2/page.tsx

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<Stack className={classes.actionscriptInfo}>
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<Title className={classes.title}>ActionScript 3 API Progress</Title>
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<Text>
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ActionScript 3 contains many different methods and classes - not
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all of which is ultimately <i>useful</i> to every application. The
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majority of content only uses a small portion of the available
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API, so even if we aren&apos;t 100% &quot;complete&quot; across
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the entirely of AVM 2, we may have enough for that content to run
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completely fine.
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ActionScript 3 contains many different methods and classes &mdash;
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not all of which are ultimately <em>useful</em> to every
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application. The majority of content only uses a small portion of
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the available API, so even if we aren&rsquo;t 100%
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&ldquo;complete&rdquo; across the entirely of AVM 2, we may have
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enough for that content to run completely fine.
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</Text>
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<Text>
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On this page, we list every single ActionScript 3 API that exists
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</Text>
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<List spacing="sm">
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<ListItem icon={<IconDone />}>
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<b>Implemented</b> items are marked as &quot;Done&quot;, and we
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believe they are fully functional. For brevity, we do not list
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completed items on this page.
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<b>Implemented</b> items are marked as &ldquo;Done&rdquo;, and
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we believe they are fully functional. For brevity, we do not
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list completed items on this page.
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</ListItem>
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<ListItem icon={<IconStub />}>
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<b>Partial</b> items exist and are enough for most content to

src/app/compatibility/page.tsx

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<Text>
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AVM 1 is the original ActionScript Virtual Machine. All movies
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made before Flash Player 9 (June 2006) will be made with AVM 1,
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and it remained supported &amp; available to authors until the
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release of Flash Professional CC (2013), after which point content
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which remained supported and available to authors until the
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release of Flash Professional CC (2013), at which point content
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started moving to AVM 2.
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</Text>
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<Text>
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<Text>
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AVM 2 was introduced with Flash Player 9 (June 2006), to replace
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the earlier AVM 1. After the release of Flash Professional CC
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(2013), authors are required to use ActionScript 3 - making any
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movie made after that date very likely to fall under this
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(2013), authors are required to use ActionScript 3 &mdash; making
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any movie made after that date very likely to fall under this
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category.
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</Text>
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<Text>
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Ruffle now has decent support for AVM 2, and it&apos;s our
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Ruffle now has decent support for AVM 2, and it&rsquo;s our
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experience that most games will work well enough to be played.
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We&apos;re still rapidly improving in this area though, so bug
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We&rsquo;re still rapidly improving in this area though, so bug
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reports about any broken content are always welcome!
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</Text>
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</AvmBlock>

src/app/contribute/page.tsx

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<Stack className={classes.contributeSection}>
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<Title className={classes.title}>🖥️ Contribute code</Title>
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<Text>
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There's a few different codebases in couple of different languages, and
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we'd welcome any help to try and maintain and improve them.
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There are a few different codebases in a couple of different languages,
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and we&rsquo;d welcome any help to try and maintain and improve them.
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</Text>
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<List>
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<ListItem icon={<IconBrandRust />}>
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If you are able and willing to, we welcome any and all financial support
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to help us fund the project going forward. With your help, we can afford
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to spend more time dedicated to Ruffle, as well as pay for expenses such
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as build servers &amp; hosting. We accept donations and sponsorships of
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as build servers and hosting. We accept donations and sponsorships of
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any kind, big or small, through Open Source Collective 501(c)(6).
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</Text>
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<Text>
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Is your favourite Flash-based site shutting down? Let them know they can
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add one JavaScript file and keep it running! Feeling nostalgic for some
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old Flash games? Go play some on Newgrounds with Ruffle installed, and
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tell your friends about it! Maybe you're a streamer and looking for some
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silly content? There's literally decades worth, now unlocked and
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accessible once more.
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tell your friends about it! Maybe you&rsquo;re a streamer and looking
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for some silly content? There&rsquo;s literally decades worth, now
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unlocked and accessible once more.
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</Text>
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</Stack>
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);
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on contributions of any kind to keep this project going, and
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absolutely would not have come as far as we have without the amazing
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support of our community who came together to make Ruffle happen. If
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you'd like to join them, there are many ways to help make Ruffle
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better than ever!
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you&rsquo;d like to join them, there are many ways to help make
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Ruffle better than ever!
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</Text>
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</Group>

src/app/contribute/sponsors.tsx

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<Title id="sponsors">💎 Diamond Sponsors</Title>
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We'd like to thank all of our sponsors, who help make this project
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We&rsquo;d like to thank all of our sponsors, who help make this project
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possible. Below are our Diamond level sponsors, without whom we would
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not be here. Thank you.
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src/app/downloads/extensions.tsx

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Browser Extension
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<Text>
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If you visit websites that have Flash content but aren't using Ruffle,
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or you want to ensure you're using the latest and greatest version of
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Ruffle on every website, then our browser extension is the perfect thing
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for you!
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If you visit websites that have Flash content but aren&rsquo;t using
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Ruffle, or you want to ensure you&rsquo;re using the latest and greatest
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version of Ruffle on every website, then our browser extension is the
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perfect thing for you!
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<Group>
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{extensions.map((extension, i) => (

src/app/downloads/page.tsx

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<Title id="website-package">Website Package</Title>
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<Text>
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You can install Ruffle onto a website using one single line of code by
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using a CDN, no extra work required! It'll always stay up to date with
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the latest available version of Ruffle.
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using a CDN, no extra work required! It&rsquo;ll always stay up to date
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with the latest available version of Ruffle.
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{'<script src="https://unpkg.com/@ruffle-rs/ruffle"></script>'}
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If you'd like to host it yourself, you can grab{" "}
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If you&rsquo;d like to host it yourself, you can grab{" "}
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src/app/page.tsx

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<b className={classes.key}>Safe to use</b> - Using the
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<b className={classes.key}>Safe to use</b> &mdash; Using the
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guarantees of Rust and WASM, we avoid the security pitfalls
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Flash was known for.
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<b className={classes.key}>Easy to install</b> - Whether
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you&apos;re a user or a website owner, we&apos;ve made it as
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<b className={classes.key}>Easy to install</b> &mdash; Whether
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you&rsquo;re a user or a website owner, we&rsquo;ve made it as
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easy as possible to get up and running.
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<b className={classes.key}>Free and open source</b> - Licensed
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MIT/Apache 2.0, you&apos;re free to use Ruffle however you
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<b className={classes.key}>Free and open source</b> &mdash;
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Licensed MIT/Apache 2.0, you&rsquo;re free to use Ruffle however
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you please!
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