MVAD edit pass (Azure#23378)

* Edits to OpenAPI doc

* Reflect AQ edits back to typespec and regenerate openapi.json

* Address PR review comments

Author: mikekistler

specification/cognitiveservices/AnomalyDetector/main.tsp

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ using TypeSpec.Versioning;
   "The Anomaly Detector API detects anomalies automatically in time series data. It supports two kinds of mode, one is for stateless using, another is for stateful using. In stateless mode, there are three functionalities. Entire Detect is for detecting the whole series with model trained by the time series, Last Detect is detecting last point with model trained by points before. ChangePoint Detect is for detecting trend changes in time series. In stateful mode, user can store time series, the stored time series will be used for detection anomalies. Under this mode, user can still use the above three functionalities by only giving a time range without preparing time series in client side. Besides the above three functionalities, stateful model also provide group based detection and labeling service. By leveraging labeling service user can provide labels for each detection result, these labels will be used for retuning or regenerating detection models. Inconsistency detection is a kind of group based detection, this detection will find inconsistency ones in a set of time series. By using anomaly detector service, business customers can discover incidents and establish a logic flow for root cause analysis.",
   {
     @doc("""
-Supported Cognitive Services endpoints (protocol and hostname, for example:
+Supported Azure Cognitive Services endpoints (protocol and host name, such as
 https://westus2.api.cognitive.microsoft.com).
 """)
     Endpoint: string,
@@ -28,20 +28,20 @@ https://westus2.api.cognitive.microsoft.com).
 )
 @doc("""
 The Anomaly Detector API detects anomalies automatically in time series data.
-It supports two kinds of mode, one is for stateless using, another is for
-stateful using. In stateless mode, there are three functionalities. Entire
-Detect is for detecting the whole series with model trained by the time series,
-Last Detect is detecting last point with model trained by points before.
-ChangePoint Detect is for detecting trend changes in time series. In stateful
-mode, user can store time series, the stored time series will be used for
-detection anomalies. Under this mode, user can still use the above three
-functionalities by only giving a time range without preparing time series in
-client side. Besides the above three functionalities, stateful model also
-provide group based detection and labeling service. By leveraging labeling
-service user can provide labels for each detection result, these labels will be
+It supports both a stateless detection mode and a
+stateful detection mode. In stateless mode, there are three functionalities. Entire
+Detect is for detecting the whole series, with the model trained by the time series.
+Last Detect is for detecting the last point, with the model trained by points before.
+ChangePoint Detect is for detecting trend changes in the time series. In stateful
+mode, the user can store time series. The stored time series will be used for
+detection anomalies. In this mode, the user can still use the preceding three
+functionalities by only giving a time range without preparing time series on the
+client side. Besides the preceding three functionalities, the stateful model
+provides group-based detection and labeling services. By using the labeling
+service, the user can provide labels for each detection result. These labels will be
 used for retuning or regenerating detection models. Inconsistency detection is
-a kind of group based detection, this detection will find inconsistency ones in
-a set of time series. By using anomaly detector service, business customers can
+a kind of group-based detection that finds inconsistencies in
+a set of time series. By using the anomaly detector service, business customers can
 discover incidents and establish a logic flow for root cause analysis.
 """)
 namespace AnomalyDetector;