@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Now, you need to configure the new page:
5252* In the form that appears, give your new page a name.
5353 This will be the label of your root page in the page tree.
5454
55- * Under the :guilabel: `Behaviour ` tab, look for the checkbox called
55+ * Under the :guilabel: `Behavior ` tab, look for the checkbox called
5656 "Use as Root Page". Ensure this is checked.
5757
5858.. figure :: /Images/ManualScreenshots/CreateRootPage/SetRootPage.png
@@ -79,29 +79,29 @@ The page is only visible in the Backend at this point
7979Configure the site
8080==================
8181
82- You need a `Site configuration <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:site-management >`_.
83- If you started in a freshly installed TYPO3 installation the site configuration
84- was auto- created and you can edit it:
82+ All sites must have a `site configuration <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:site-management >`_.
83+ If you have created a new page in the root of the page tree, the site configuration has been
84+ created automatically and you can edit it:
8585
8686.. figure :: /Images/ManualScreenshots/CreateRootPage/AutogeneratedSiteConfig.png
8787 :alt: The auto-generated site of a new root page viewed in the "Sites" module
8888
89- You can find the auto-generated site for your root page in the module :guilabel: `Site Management > Sites`
89+ You can find the auto-generated site configuration for your root page in the module :guilabel: `Site Management > Sites`
9090
9191.. _create-root-page-site-package :
9292
9393Create a site package for the theme
9494===================================
9595
96- The site needs a theme, called "site package" in the TYPO3 world.
97- See chapter
98- `site package <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:creating-a-site-package >`_.
96+ The site needs a theme, also known as a "site package" in the TYPO3 world. Learn more about
97+ `creating a site package <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:creating-a-site-package >`_.
9998
10099.. admonition :: Trouble shooting
101100
102- TYPO3 does not come with a default theme you need to install
103- or create a site package. Otherwise you will see a message like the
104- following when trying to display the page in the frontend:
101+ TYPO3 does not come with a default theme. You will have to install
102+ or create a site package. If your site does not have a theme configured,
103+ you will see a message like the the one below when trying to display
104+ the page in the frontend:
105105
106106 .. figure :: /Images/ManualScreenshots/CreateRootPage/NoTypoScriptFound.png
107107 :alt: Error message: No TypoScript record found!
@@ -110,8 +110,8 @@ See chapter
110110
111111 * `How to create a site package <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:how-to-create-a-site-package >`_
112112 * `Troubleshooting "No TypoScript found!" <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3tsref:guide-troubleshooting >`_
113- * Use the `Introduction Package <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:introductionpackage-index >`_
114- with a ready to use theme and predefined content.
113+ * The `Introduction Package <https://docs.typo3.org/permalink/t3start:introductionpackage-index >`_
114+ includes a ready-to- use theme and example content.
115115
116116.. _create-root-page-enable :
117117
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